Retrospective. The last page. I had problems laying out this page and I think it shows. It's too horizontal, too even, not enough variation in the pacing. The worst thing about this page is that I put so much black in the middle, and as a result, I didn't get the contrast I wanted between the first panel and the bottom row.
The first panel looked really good in roughs, but it came out the worst after clean up, maybe I rushed it. Panel ten was really hard to draw, I redrew that guy a few times and I still don't think I got it right, gotta do more lifedrawing/anatomy studies.
Oh well, I think I learnt some important lessons from doing this comic, so hopefully the next one will be a lot better.
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